Allisson take 2

I am always up for a challenge...I thrive on challenges. It is with great pleasure that I may have come up with something for Allisson and Tobin's skyline invite. After i sent her the image, I realize that reminds me of the intro to Frasier. I am crossing my fingers, that this alternative is a "go".

My prior design may have been a bit unbalanced (see below).